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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 22/03/2020 07:51 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 13/03/2020 09:16 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 11/03/2020 13:32 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 10/03/2020 03:07 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 05/03/2020 20:49 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 21/02/2020 10:20 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: suminghan75 (Firmado) · Fecha: 19/02/2020 13:21 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

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Nombre: Aaronfrba26 (Firmado) · Fecha: 07/05/2018 07:15 · Capítulo: El día más largo del año Parte 1

Fascinado a morir con este capítulo.

Sin duda estas respetando la trama de Naruto vs Pain, lo cual será el siguiente capítulo, aunque no creo que lo abarques por completo.

No se que les vas a hacer a los adolescentes, pero a mi me parece que los vas a asesinar por el hecho de que tendrían una relacion monstruosa con las niñas, de por sí eso sería vomitar en extremo, de solo imaginarlo por supuesto.

Ojala y ya pongas que Ino le diga a Naruto de su embarazo multiple, siento que pondrás más a la niña por el lado de Naruto y el niño por parte de Ino.

Será divertido, tierno y gracioso a la vez, me dio mucho gusto escribirte, que te vaya muy bien y hasta luego...



Nombre: Aaronfrba26 (Firmado) · Fecha: 16/04/2018 05:02 · Capítulo: Al rescate y resurrección de Gaara, Chiyo hace un último recurso

Volví después de mucho tiempo y por fin lo volví a leer para refrescar mi ayuda hacia ti, este quizás es el capítulo con el flashback más crudo, inenarrable y digno de críticas muy fuertes, quizás lo hiciste para que tu historia no fuera tan “suave”, pero aquí sí que te pasaste, pero debo reconocer que lo plasmaste muy bien, gráficamente en el sentido de destruir a un niño, y más si se trata de Naruto.


La verdad de este capítulo, lo más ruidoso fue el flashback y lo que sucedió despues, ya que la muerte de Chiyo quedó en segundo plano, con este contenido que se notó, te inspiraste muy pero muy bien.


Te felicito, tienes una excelente imaginación creativa, hasta mi siguiente comentario en otro capítulo.


Nos vemos…



Nombre: Kirsti666 (Firmado) · Fecha: 14/06/2017 23:25 · Capítulo: Una nueva oportunidad

Basura?

No algo peor que la basura

Excremento?

Tal vez...



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